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=First Things First...= As it says on my userpage, I am the author of Star Trek: Conflict. The ideas and story presented therein will probably shock, disgust if not offend many "loyal" Trek-fans who would view it as opposed to the essence and ideology of Star Trek.

However, the concept of a corrupt Federation in Conflict stems from hours upon hours of deep thoughtful research into established Star Trek canon on my part. In the series, there were too many unanswered vital questions that humanity simply ignored. Also, I believe that my story is in the realm of established canon since it was Gene Roddenberry whose original idea was to have all religions on Earth dead by the time of Star Trek TOS. However, TOS was a product of its time (the 60s), when the establishment was still quite respected and anything that might seem inflammatory was censored (originally, Spock was to be a Martian with red skin, but the combination of that and the short black hair, pointed ears and slanted eyes was too familiar to the "devil" figure held by most Westerners, so it was cut out). This is why many of the original ideas for TOS episodes were revised (read the information about ).

TNG, however, came about in the 80s, when the media became more liberal than it once was, and therefore the writers (Roddenberry being part of the creating of TNG episodes early on) were able to insert their own ideas without fear of much censure (which is why we have potentially inflammatory episodes such as, , , - one which is especially inflammatory towards religion, and one in which Gene Roddenberry himself had influence in the creation - ,  among many others).

After Gene's death, his successors, being more open-minded regarding religion, allowed several positive regards to religion to slip into Star Trek (basically the entire Benjamin Sisko-Bajoran-Emissary plotline of Deep Space Nine,, , ). However, this does not exclude the founding facts: and they are these...


 * 1 - As established by Gene Roddenberry in TNG, religion on Earth is dead.
 * 2 - Evolution, currently in deep agrument regarding its validity, is, in the Star Trek universe, universely accepted as bona fide scientific and historical fact (which is indoctrination, which involves repressing ideas that do not agree with evolutionary dogma, like religion).
 * 3 - As established in, it is the belief among humans that they have achieved/are close to achieving a level of god-hood. This is further shown, though not explicitly mentioned, in human's scientific discoveries and inventions, in particular those non-human beings which are capable of achieving a state of humanity - Data, Voyager's EMH, nicknamed "The Doctor" among others - thus proving that humans are capable of creating life...something that ONLY a god can do...which negates Jean-Luc Picard's rebuttal from where he says "I see us one day becoming that..." as false since there is proof that, according to the authors, humans have already reached that level.

(More to be added on the explication of ST: Conflict)

Bookworm1138 20:05, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

=Discussion Page=

RE: RE: The Prophecy
Ive read your post and you do have more then a few good points especially your point on Q, However Picard had seemed to almost be obsessed with the "slippery slope" of bending or breaking the Prime Directive due to his own fears of possible interplanetary "imperialism" and futuristic Manifest Destiny. And while some of these fears are shared by Q (Female) (Warship VOY) (mainly that Humanity will become somewhat like them after knowing all that there is to know).

However I also did think of a Warship VOY episode that shows Female Q and Picard meeting at some point in where (mind you its only a sketch in my head so far) while it starts out as a intellectual argument about Picard's actions in the past concerning the Prime Directive, after a while it turns into a moralistic scolding by Q as to the simple point that while rules and boundaries are important (a lesson that Q herself had learned from some sort of severe disregard of the Continuums own rules of non interference that she herself might somehow have broke at some point centuries ago) the human drive to both protect and preserve life is by far more important then any Directive or "all powerful law" that tells him to do otherwise.

The meeting might end with a quote by Q from James T. Kirk himself such as "Humanity earns its right to call itself Human by saying "I will not kill today"." or something like that (on a small note the quote came from not TOS but from a cartoon episode of the Original Series). Also it was a point from many TNG fans (this was years before I ever read or even knew about Memory Alpha or Wikia in General) that perhaps Beverly Crusher had left the Enterprise-D to take a post at Starfleet Medical for a few episodes between the 1st and 2nd seasons where she was replaced by Dr Pulaski because perhaps Beverly found Picard's fears and ideals surrounding the Prime Directive far too extreme and unbending even in the face of extremes such as the eradication of a pre warp society.

Also as I had stated previously while Typhuss may have some sort of STD in this other reality it shouldnt be AIDS but instead a fictional future illness that has far worse physical and possibly even mental effecting symptoms then any current illness actually existing today. Also on your general point that how can many current lifestyle based illnesses be treated or even cured in the future well just remember that not only is this wiki for Fanon but all of star trek is only Science Fiction so any wiz-bang cure or treatment for nearly any disease existing now can be created. The 1929 silent film Metropolis had presented that an entire slave force would be needed to manually operate all machinery in the near future 24/7 not even considering that such a thing as computers would ever be invented in order to lessen the workload on Humans and make all machines fully automated.

Well call back if you have any more ideas or comments on this. Thanks! From -- Lindsay Lohan Phoenix 03:33, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

The Prophecy: a few ideas
Sorry its taken me so long, I had a few other chores to do earlier but Im here and I just read the ep. and I did have some ideas. 1st i think that while sexually transmitted diseases may still exist by that point in time but AIDS probably doesnt. Even in other ahows and films in science fiction AIDS is told as it is eradicated by some point in the 21st Century. However I do recall in the Stallone action film Demolition Man that it is said that while AIDS was eliminated it was replaced by diseases considered "far worse by comparison" and which led to society becoming the fairly sexually and socially restricted society as was depicted in the film. Also according to the film these other illnesses 1st appeared at some point in what would be considered somewhere in Trek history between the Eugenics wars and World War III.

Also I think that the Ragnarok reality should be at least somewhat incorporated into a "Crisis on Infinite Treks" sort of idea that Rift Fleet had sometime ago and had asked me to join in on. Basically the base of the story line was that some unknown force was trying destroy not only the Prime but all universes either slowly one by one or all at once. I myself had the idea of the old school concepts of all of the TOS episodes that had either extra galactic or dimensional species that had tried to either destroy or conquer our galaxy. Some of these episodes are Doomsday Machine, Catspaw, the immunity syndrome,...etc. And I had the idea of a group or "Cabal" of outer galactic/dimensional powers that had been trying similar to the factions of the Temporal Cold War to either destroy our galaxy either for nihilistic reasons or to "terraform" our reality more to the conditions of their own reality.

Oddly enough while the Federation had both encountered and successfully fought off many outer galactic threats even through the Movie era its now in hindsight seems strange that Gene Roddenberry would create a character like Q that would (almost redundantly) tell Picard that Humanity wasn't ready or prepared for what truly was out there even though Kirk had seemingly singlehandedly fought off "what was truly out there" on a regular basis.

Also by this idea more characters should be incorporated into this point of the story such as James T. Kirk (alternate reality) and Emmy the alternate reality Enterprises Command Core Hologram which I had discovered after seeing several pieces of fan art on deviantART and reading on Memory Alpha that according to JJ Abrams the current films ships are far more advanced because of scan data of the Narada retrieved from the wreckage of the Kelvin which had help to advance Federation technology by decades or even centuries so such tech on 23rd Century ships should now be possible. Also Christopher Steel (Christina Rookwood's father) should be included as well in an attempt to correct the timeline. Call back soon if you had any more to add on this. Thanks. From -- Lindsay Lohan Phoenix 07:25, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Image News
Just called in to tell you about a new custom image creating site that I thought every one here and on a few other fanon wikis should know about. The site is called Offical Seal Maker it allows for you to create your own service or organization badges or insignias for anything you want. You can select any color and written font for your symbol and when youre done just save as a normal gif image and add to your article. For an example see the Imperial Federation of United Worlds page for its new image. I just thought that every one should know. Thanks! From -- Lindsay Lohan Phoenix 02:29, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

AN new Idea youve just gotta put in Conflict
Ive just read right now on Memory Alpha about a unproduced Trek film that had several ideas/concepts that I thought just had to be included into either your history of the Federation or in the background of Conflict itself. In the script treatment of the film titled the Beginning it tells of an purely all military crew aboard the NX-Omega Starfleets 1st Warp 8 capable ship commanded by Captain Kirks grandfather Tiberius at some point between the Enterprise and TOS eras during the Earth-Romulan War.

It turns out that later its discovered that Tiberius own family is part of a Xenophobic Neo-Nazi group holed up somewhere in a Antarctica Nazi base created in World War II and by this it turns out that it was possibly a top secret aeronautic lab that created experimental aircraft that may have been used as the basis of all current Starfleet ship technology (including the NX class).

And while later in the script it states that Tiberius spends the rest of the film trying to prove that he doesnt share his families Xenophobic beliefs this seems suspect since he leads an unprovoked or needed invasion of Romulus (which happens early on in the film) and later a seeming suicide mission to deploy a Nuclear Bomb (given to him by the Xenophobic relatives that he insists he doesnt agree with) over the Romulans capital. Please call back on this as soon as you read this and if you have any other ideas to add to this. Thanks! From -- Lindsay Lohan Phoenix 21:07, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Thats sort of a problem
. The problem on the Holly page is that there is no image I could find of her so far. You see Holly was supposed to look like frasier star Jane Leeves in an starfleet uniform from an old Voyager parody done years ago (theres a link to it on youtube through Memory Alpha) however after looking for days this image was all I could find (shes the one in the engineering uniform). I also tried to find a image of her in a low cut black top also oddly to no avail. But who knows you may have more luck then I.

Ive looked every where including DeviantART for a image of Ms. Leeves by herself in this outfit (I clearly remembered an entire series of promo shots of each of the Fraiser actors in their Starfleet uniforms from the skit both standing by themselves and together.) and Ive even asked Wakachukie to assist but he hasnt seemed to be able to find one so far. I picked her for Holly as an sort of inside joke to Red Dwarf. You see Jane actually did play as Red Dwarfs command computer avatar Holly 6000 in a very short lived American version of the series (it only lasted 2 episodes) and I thought that a combination of her version of that character along with the British version (who had invented a interdimensional jump drive) would be interesting.

Another thing I had heard recently was in Yesterdays Enterprise which at the beginning of the ep. when Guinan is in Ten Forward and realizes that everything has changed around her there is a few lines of barely audible comm chatter in where a Enterprise-D officer is told to report to the ships C.I.C. In the current version of Battlestar Galactica the CIC or Command Intelligence/Intel Core or Actual as it is also known is the name for an Battlestars Bridge. However in the episode the term CIC isnt used to mean the Enterprise-D's Bridge so it was never known what that ship section truly was. Anyway like I said I thought you (and Wakachukie) might find that interesting. Well call back on all of this soon. And Thanks for the assist!. From -- Lindsay Lohan Phoenix 05:31, October 25, 2009 (UTC)

Thats a very good question
I just seen your recent post and thats a good question while the fascistic governmental structure known as Communism should have no longer exist by the 23rd and 24th centuries it did seem to still exist in some small way in Star Trek. The only logical reason I can think of is that mainly most of the series original writers lived in a Cold War and early post-cold war era and as many writers do they oddly imagine the future as really no different from the time they currently live in now except for technology. However 1 very good example of your point is the character of Chekov while a loyal TOS Enterprise crew member he did always seem to act with a sense of nationalistic pride and somewhat superiority for his Mother Russia in a manner similar to a individual in a either current or early post Cold War society. Even creator Gene Roddenberry many times had said Chekov was created to represent humanities unity in a futuristic era. Even many of the shows early viewers thought that Chekov was some sort of Communist or Socialist and with your mention of the TNG Episode this does both explain and add many other questions. Mainly for instance why would any other form of government exist on a singular government Earth?. And why didn't Worf who was raised by adoptive Russian parents ever espouse any Communist or Socialist beliefs to any other Enterprise-D Crewmembers. also why were there no Socialist Chinese personnel on any later trek series?. personally I thought that if anything merely an enlightened form of Socialism would exist similar to present day Great Britain (former Prime Minister Tony Blair was a socialist). On a final note someone here has created an alternate reality based on either central Communist or Socialist beliefs. And on a very final note did you see the "Clone Trooper" idea for Conflict I had sent you?. Call back on this soon. Thanks. -- 5:46 PM (PST) 28 July 2009

A few more new ideas for Conflict and a new universe Ive discovered
After watching a few episodes of the animated trek series I had a few new ideas for Conflict. you see I had seen a episode called the Infinite Vulcan in where the TOS Crew discovers a planet of a self exiled geneticist from the Eugenics Wars that was trying to create a "Master Race" of peacekeeping "Clone Troopers" (sound familiar?) in order to enforce peace both on war ravaged earth and throughout the galaxy not however knowing that the Eugenics Wars were ended centuries earlier. So I had the idea that the Neo-Nazi factions within the Federation want to reactivate this scientists genetics project in order to create their own "Master Race" since none of these technologies existed in the WWII Era. and on the new universe while reading Memory Alpha I read the background and many story summaries on the Gold Key Trek Comics (which were the 1st Star Trek comics ever made) and while reading them I realized that while they were not offically reconigized by MA as its own universe due to the differing technology, terminology, and drastically different behaviors and personalities of the main characters is why Im calling it the Gold Key Universe. Here are a few interesting ideas and differences.

Differences of Gold Key

 * 1. Militantism: as with Conflict, Warship, Mirror and a few other universes written here the Gold Key Universe seems to appear just as more militant than the Prime Universe. 1st the majority of the Gold Key U's Starfleet Officers (including command crew) all appear to have some sort of Special Ops. or heavy infantry military training. Also in many issues Captain Kirk does not hold back in ordering a large weapons attack against a alien species whenever any of the crewmembers are in trouble (whether their main characters or second string redshirts). This also leads to the other main interesting point of the Gold Key U.


 * 2. All women of the Gold Key U. are MACO Troopers: you see right ALL women including Uhura and Yeoman Janice Rand were at least in appearance wore a 23rd Century redshirt variation of Enterprise era MACO Troop uniforms (although more form fitting in a TOS style) and seemed to be equipped with a heavy Phaser rifle for nearly all possible combat situations along with a heavier variation of a Type II hand Phaser. Even Christine Chapel seemed to have some special combat medical training. And speaking of "redshirt"s..


 * 3. Redshirts dont die: Or at least they dont seem to die as easily as they seem to within the Prime U.. The most likely reason for this is that most Operations Division officers probably all had recived MACO training before being posted on the Enterprise so with their specialized combat and surivival training they would more likely to survive any hostile or unknown alien situation unlike their Prime U. Counterparts


 * 4. Contridictions in Technology: Another interesting and odd point of the Gold Key U. is the many contridictions of technology that are explained in the original comics (the most likely reason for this is that most of the original comics writers were 1950's pulp Science Fiction writers and knew little about the more advanced Tech) 1 good example is propulsion while the Gold Key version of the USS Enterprise (NCC-1701) oddly had only heavy fuel powered rockets for sub-light flight it also appeared to have some sort of Transwarp Core for long ran ge propulsion. another contridiction is weapons, while the Gold Key Enterprise were equipped with Phaser Banks as primary weapons it also had short and long range heavy Laser Cannons as well as several nuclear warheads (which would appear obsolete in the Prime Universe). And many times away teams would arm themselves with heavy Laser instead of phaser rifles (however it might be tactically percived as by using less advanced lasers in a combat situation they might create far less civilan and collateral damage than with more powerful phasers.). However overall the comic did have more advanced weaponry than what had existed in the Original TV Series. Such as a Electronic powered Multi EM Spectrum cannon which was both a hand operated and ship mounted weapons system that could cut through any form of force fields or heavy shielding (if this weapon had existed in the Prime U. disabling any Borg defenses would have been easy.) along with hand operated Quantum munitons. Also the Before mentioned Red MACO Uniforms were extremely durable, capable of withstanding up to near Absolute Zero cold conditions. Also due to a similar alliance between Humans and Tholians the Gold Key Enterprise is equipped with a Tholian Web Generator.


 * 5. The Greek Pantheon Lives!: contrary to the TOS episode "Who Mourns for Adonis" in where it appears that the alien race that called themselves the Greek Pantheon had willingly ended themselves with no one left to worship them however according to the Gold Key Comics that similar to the biomemetic copy of Voyager that accidently transphased itself into the Warship VOY Universe the Pantheon had transported themselves into a remote region of the Perseus spiral arm of the Alpha Quadrant within the Gold Key U.

I was just writing all of this to see if you thought that it would be interesting to create this as a new universe all on its own or to just incorporate some of these ideas into each of our own stories. Call back as soon as you finish reading all of this (I know its a lot!) and tell me what you think. Thanks. -- 4:40 AM (PST) 25 July 2009
 * 6. McCoy's Daughter: In the intro scene of McCoy in the recent Trek film he mentions to Kirk that his Ex-Wife took the whole planet in his divorce so he had no other choice but to join Starfleet is it possible that she kept a previously unknown daughter as well?. In the Gold Key U. Dr. McCoy is revealed to have a estranged daughter that he hadnt seen in years named Barbara McCoy. Is it possible well see a live action version of Barbara on a future sequel of the current film series?. We'll see...

Hi and on Warship VOY Rookwood
I see that you've noticed the Alicia Rookwood (Warship VOY) page. Hope you like it (it literally took me hours to repaint the image on the page, If I didnt and left the image as is it I might have been thrown out of this wiki for inapropriate content). Anyway Sorry I havent been around much lately but Ive been putting the final touches on just the 1st page of the Warship VOY webcomic (which involved a large amount of upgrading my computers paint programs and installing a large amount new fonts from a site called Famous Fonts (Ill give you the link as soon as I can). And finally I saw your Bajorian-Cardassian Alliance article and Nice!. And I had a thought since you have a slightly clearer writing style and can explain things at times in your own articles better than I can I was wondering if you wanted to become a more regular contributor to Warship VOY. Many other editors in the past have tried to help but ended up being too busy with their own projects. But since our projects run close together I assume that you could add a little more to the project. Especially with the Rookwood (Warship VOY) article I was hoping for the character to interact with both versions of Enterprise-C. Please call back as soon as you can with any ideas on this and anything in the Warship Universe. -- 6:29 PM (PST) 17 July 2009

RE: Imperial Federation Backstory
Well it is...Interesting but totally wrong. So youll be the 1st to see the History (of what ive imagined so far) of the Warship Voyager universe. As before I got the idea from Voyager ep Living Witness in where the lead alien researcher 1st believes that the "Warship Voyager" came from Mars not Earth (This was due to the fact that it was read off of an heavily degraded Astrometric Data Node). So I had the idea that instead of Humanity Orignating on Earth (as is based on a Many-Earths Theory) as it is in the Prime & Mirror universes what if humans 1st appeared and has always lived on Mars instead of Earth. However this led to a conundrum if humans always lived on Mars who or what lives on Warship VOY Earth?. The solution came easily Martians or more technically specific Terrans. You see I wanted to have neighboring alien races within our solar system and also I wanted for humanity to achieve First Contact with another sentient species centuries before any Human ever met a single Vulcan also I thought that some sort of War of the Worlds conflict might be interesting. So simply put Humans are Martians, Martians are Terrans with a Empire consisting of a conglomeration of conquered worlds and moons from around the Solar System which is unknown to Humanity until Terrans invade Mars in 1894. 2nd as youve seen in the Enterprise-C's history section Vulcans are very different than their Prime U. counterparts. This came from the realization that Vulcans in the Mirror Universe seemed to while ready to perform acts of violence were really no different than that of Prime Universe Vulcans. Even Captain Kirk noted that both versions of Spock were "Men of Integrity" this however defys even Vulcan Logic due to the simple fact that this sort of behavior is counter intuitive in a universe where everyone acts in a oppisitite manner. So I 1st gave the idea of Illogical and Violent Vulcans to Rift Fleet for his own version of the Mirror Universe but he didnt want it so I decided to place them in my own universe in where Vulcans behave similar to the way Vulcans were before they found the Way of Sarek Brutal, Savage, Illogical, and Warlike. So here is the Historical Timeline of what I imagined so far.


 * 1st in some sort of Lord of the Rings pre-historical timeperiod the Human Empire is founded. Due to this all of Humanity is under a unilateral global rule for up to current date/stardate the past 10 to 12,000 years
 * 1894: The Terran Empire invades Mars, Due to Important Tactical Information given by several Terran inslaved alien races the Human Imperial Navy is capable of striking back and forcing the Invaders to retreat for over a century.
 * 1990:the reign of the Imperial House of Singh begins the top secret research project only known as Project: Genome begins this leads to a totalitarian military coup now known as the Eugenics inititive. This action leads to the 1st anti-imperial rebellion in over 50 years this act is known as the Eugenics Wars.
 * 2063: After World Wars 3 & 4 of the Eugenics conflict the Terran Empire after spying on humanity for over a century realizes that Humans are at their militarily weakest and are open for invasion.
 * 2064: The Terran Empire begins a heavy strike incursion of Humanity and Mars however unknown to the Terrans that a counter-invasion force led by General Zefram Cochrane Inventor of a revolutionary Faster than Light Drive that Warps the fabric of surrounding space. The prototype drive is placed in the Generals flagship the N.X.O. Phoenix. The Phoenix leads a Counter-Invasion force of the planet Earth. The combining assault of Human Military forces on both Mars and Earth leads to the successful takeover and annexing of earth. With this act the Reunification of the Human Empire begins and the Human Celestial Empire begins to take its place within the galaxy.
 * 2098: After nearly a century of corruption, racism, and global destruction the final living desendant of Singh, Kahn Noonien Singh is thrown into exile by a coup performed by 1st Emperor and member of the Imperial House of Sato Hiro Sakei. This action leads to a decades long era of peace and the beginnings of long range exploration.
 * 2139: The warrior race known as the Vulcan Imperium learns that Humans are an Warp-Capable species with low defence capability this leads to a conflict between Vulcan and Humanity that lasts for near decades.
 * 2140 The Romulan Star Empire an Interstellar intelectual Monarchy similar to the human empire is Humanitys 1st ally against the Imperium. This begins the Interimperial galactic alliance that is the backbone of the Imperial Federation.
 * 2159: After years of fighting a losing battle against the Vulcans A ship from a Paralell Universe designated USS Enterprise (NCC-1701-C) is found damaged at the near border of the solar system, however the ships crew helps to unite and gain new allies for the sieged empire. This is when the beginnings of the Federation were formed. Also after intentionally withholding various weapons technologies from Humanity for decades and also after several massive attacks on Earth Terrans realize that without alligning with Humans they too will perish. So the Terran Alliance begins.
 * 2160: After the Vulcan/Radical Romulan alliance is defeated with the alliance of 25 Alien defense fleets led by ships N.X.T. Enterprise 1701-001 and Enterprise-C the allies realize that without an united front against all current and future enemies they may undergo the risk of genoside again also after years of an Imperial Order of Martial Law over the Terrans the order is finally recinded and the Terran Alliance becomes the 1st offical member of the Imperial Federation of United Worlds Which makes the Imperial Federation an Fully unified Constitutional Monarchy mainly under the rule of the Viceroy and the Imperial Council (which consists of the Federations Leading members).

A little suprize
Here is a little (Figuratively speaking) preview of a Warship Voyager Webcomic So tell me what you think!. Call back soon on this. Thanks! -- 10:59 PM (PST) 30 June 2009

On Tholians and ISS Enterprise-C
Interesting Idea however an alliance with Tholians (environment wise) could be possible due to the simple fact that the Federation has EV Shield/personal force field technology since the TOS era. the tech was only shown a couple of times on the old Trek cartoon it was basically a large white belt with an big blinking light in its center that created a complete environmental shield over its wearer which could easily allow either Humans or Tholians to exist on either planet. However no later Trek movie or series has ever shown a live action version of this tech, the reason why is unknown but it would have saved the film or series creators a fortune in costume design instead of having to create a new bulky space suit for nearly every new show. Anyway on a final note Ive created a ISS Enterprise (NCC-1701-C) page and its needs help with its history section (like it needs 1 for instance). Call back soon. Thanks. -- 5:14 AM (PST) 30 June 2009

Hi
Sorry I havent called back to you or anyone else really in a while either here or on facebook Ive been suffering from a slight cold and also Ive really been trying to finish my own original artwork for the characters for Warship Voyager however I wanted to give you a little possible more expansion of your Conflict Saga. You see a while ago Ive read a parody Star Trek version of the TV Show 24 on Memory Alfalfa (Its a Parody Trek wiki), heres the link if you want to read it Star Trek: 24. Anyway I really liked the story and wanted to try to create a more serious version here however I only have gotten as far as creating a Jack Bauer page and up until now it only appears as a copy of Memory Alfalfa's version only slightly more serious. So after now making Jack more a prime universe character (who is a Section 31 operative) I thought I'd let you have him in your story. Seriously please expand this page I really cant think of anything else to put there and a tough character like Jack might more easily fit into your story. Also here are several other concepts that might fit into Conflict. Call back as soon as you can on all of this. Thanks. -- 1:58 AM (PST) 26 June 2009
 * 1. Mafia Syndicates use illegally stolen EMH's for their own personal phyisicians mainly due to the fact that they can be programmed not to reveal who their paients are.
 * 2. some Orion Females are the secret heads of Anti-Federation terrorist organizations due to their ability to manipulate men to their will through their pheramones.

All Right..And an Invitation
Sure Ill help on Edward Shield's siblings but I at least need a small amount of info such as names, ages,..Etc. And also Id like to offer a invitation to a new fanon wiki that I created Battlestar Galactica Fanon Wiki where me and Wakachukie have created a Warship VOY version of the Galactica universe Called WarStar Galactica were also writing episodes where any editor can particpate. Basically 1 editor writes 1 or several lines for their characters and then another writer adds their own lines for their characters and so forth and so on. Heres the link for the 1st episode if you want to participate WarStar Galactica (Series 1 Episode 1) also you can create your own WarStar ship of fleet if you want. Call back soon on this. Thanks. -- 6:16 (PST) 07 June 2009

On Warship VOY Universe
All right as it says several times on this wikis front page. Yes the Warship VOY Universe IS its own seperate universe and NO IT IS ABSOLUTLEY NOT A PART OF THE MIRROR UNIVERSE!. Sorry I had to be so visually loud but I belive Ive made my point. However its perfectly understandable that you would mistake this Universe with the Mirror Universe. This is because this version of voyager was originally written as a sort of mirror version ship and crew in an Voyager episode called Living Witness. In fact the main reason I created this universe was because in nearly every Star Trek series that didnt have a Mirror U episode the writers created a "Sort of Mirror" version of the main characters in where the ship or crew is either more militant, tuffer, more heavily armed, or just plain meaner than their original counterparts. So I thought it would be interesting to combine element from many of these "sort of mirror" episodea and fuse them into its own universe. Thats why the Conflict and Warship VOY Universes are so similar.

And finally of course you can include any of Warship VOY Characters into your story although one of the previous editors (before being blocked for unreadable writing) had a pretty good idea for my characters that once they come into the Prime Universe their bodies begin to break down at a Sub-Quantum level. Also I had recently read an article that due to the changes within the universe of the recent Star Trek film that it is possible that the Khitomer accords were never signed thus escalating the Federation/Klingon War, I just thought that maybe this might add an interesting point to your story. So call me back as soon as you read this. -- 12:07 AM. (PST) 21 May 2009

Sure everyones welcome
I beleive 1 good phrase deserves another from the recent film The Sprit

Commissioner Dolan: "Is it just me or is every G*D Damn woman in this G*D Damn city out of their G*d Damn minds!"

Policewoman Morganstern: "Not at all sir, we're just really equipped".

Anyway on the subject of Enterprise-C you're welcome to include anything you think is nessesary to your story line. So just call me back if you need anything. Thanks. -- 7:08 PM. (PST) 26 April 2009

A Few possible ideas for Star Trek: Conflict
Ive seen what youve written for your story and here are a few possible story ideas for your story line


 * 1. What if instead of most of the crew simply being killed off what about some of Enterprise-C'S main crew as they reenter the prime universe through the interdimensional time rift are accidentally transported into Warship Voyager universes current timeline but most of the ships remaining crew beleive that they most likley died (I was hoping for at least some of the main crew to survive and interact with the Imperial Federation universe and characters at some point later on) and upon returning to the prime universe the Enterprise-C is fired upon by whoever remains of the original Romulan fleet and then are killed, captured..Etc.


 * 2. The reason for the 3rd timeline can be easily explained due to the fact that the Enterprise-C never arrived to meet Enterprise-D within the original storyline or possibly can meet it later in order to correct their own timeline.


 * 3. The possible inclusion of Warship Voyager Characters such as Q (Female) or Belle-001 or her possible prime universe equivalent could enter at some point into the story line in an attempt to correct what was done to the timeline.

Call Back as soon as you can on any new ideas or thoughts on any of this. Thanks. -- 6:23 PM. (PST) 26 April 2009

Welcome and thoughts
First of all, welcome to Memory Gamma! I've just seen you create a page for your story and saw the following line:


 * I have already come up with many ideas for characters and events, but I will need some advice on how to make this better.

If you would like, I can provide some ideas. I am writing a Trek story of my own, and have had several people give me advice that is really helping. I'd be happy to pass on a few tips! Hope your story goes well, DaveSubspace Message 14:33, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
 * I've got a Romulan on my ship too, the Romulans are allies with (but not a part of) the Federation. There's a point about him not being a captain, as some people aren't too sure about Romulans commanding Federation ships, but I'll exploit that point a little later.


 * In terms of editing the Enterprise-C, just go ahead and do whatever with it - just be sure to write that it's from your series that certain events have happened, because there will be a few different "realities" created by people. On some pages (mainly year pages) there are differences, marked out clearly (I think/hope).
 * Ideas - for storywriting mainly, but I was told to write what ideas I had down asap, so you remember them for later. Do it as soon as you get one, or you may forget it! Don't get rid of any ideas - or dismiss them as "silly" - they may be handy later (in another story). Put in a few plot twists that will be resolved over a period of time (or over several books in my case - all unwritten at this point).
 * That's all I can think of for now, if you need any help with editing/templates/general stuff just let me know (or one of the admins) and we'll help you out. DaveSubspace Message 16:46, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Story ideas? Well, let me know when you really need some and I'll try to think of something original - I have ideas for nearly 10 of my stories (which are long stories) but I'm sure I can chuck a few your way. It'd be interesting to see what two different people can do with the same idea, but different universes.
 * I might stop using the word different and its variations. I've used it way too much. DaveSubspace Message 17:20, 26 April 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, just a small one - I removed the thumb tag as you don't need one in a template, only when it's a stand-alone picture. And 292px is the standard size for pics in templates. DaveSubspace Message 19:12, 26 April 2009 (UTC)

Story arcs
Just to let you know, I made a new page for one of your arcs because the spelling on "arc" was wrong, but everything on it is still there, and I made a category for the story arcs at... Category:Story Arcs. And I've added another message to the bottom of the one under this (Request)... DaveSubspace Message 22:37, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

Tholia
Was looking at Tholia, you've classed it as Class N, what sort of conditions does it have? I was looking around to see what other people thought, according to Memory Beta Tholia is Class Y, makes more sense - way too hot, hazardous to life other than theirs. What do you think? You can make yours Class N if you want, and in my story it can be Class Y, I wonder what your take is. DaveSubspace Message 00:27, 10 July 2009 (UTC)
 * I looked at the planetary classification thing, maybe it would count as class T or simply a gas giant? I don't think the Tholians "breathe" anything, and they exist in temperatures of 450K or something. Jupiter is (as Wikipedia says) 165K, which apparently is -108C... how does that work? Basically, a very hot planet, but one where you can see other stuff (like "houses" and other buildings). According to this, it has to be extremely hot. We're talking almost twice the temperature of boiling water. I'd assume that some gas giants have high temperatures... DaveSubspace Message 00:06, 11 July 2009 (UTC)

Re: Medji Crassana
Well, most presidents have been non-Human, as a starter. As for your other point, I respect your comments and understand what you mean. I'm not sure I'll be including the dictatorship part now, I haven't written anything about it, but they were just some of the thoughts I had. My version of events is a little "darker", and I'm trying to come up with something that hasn't really been written about yet (in any series or film). Plus with writing it in a different time period not yet covered gives me more freedom to do what I want. So thanks for your comments, I'll take them into consideration - but remember, we all have our own realities, and I'm sure not everyone will like what is written. DaveSubspace Message 14:19, 20 June 2009 (UTC)

Hi!
Hey, I'm glad you followed the link I gave you and found this site! You've gotten a lot of writing done since you joined Memory Gamma. I appreciate the fact that you've been cooperative to me making some minor edits to the way you structured your articles -- I wanted to leave you this note to say I intend no interference in your creativity, I just work as a copyeditor who likes to work with those who are cooperative. I made some edits to make things easy to link to (by changing "U.S.S." to "USS" for example), but if I ever do anything you disagree with, just leave me a note. -- Captain MKB 01:34, 28 April 2009 (UTC)

The Designer
Hello and welcome to Memory Gamma! Wakachukie 14:19, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

Atreides
Sorry about earlier confusion. Anyways, Michael P. Atreides is just what I wrote on my user page. He is an intelligent, atheletic person with starship command qualities - just ask if you have any specific questions about him. Wakachukie 19:15, 7 June 2009 (UTC)

I would be pleased if you would include Michael Atreides in a story.

Re: Hoshi Sato (mirror)

 * Opps, it must have been an edit conflict? I do request that you write it in your own words though. I hate copy editing. — TrekkyStar ( talk ) [[Image:UhuraIcon.gif|40px]] 19:08, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

Star Trek: Conflict page
I think that all fan fiction stories pages should be arranged like yours, maybe add a few more links to other pages using brackets like this. If you need anything else inspected, just ask. Also, I see that you've hit your 3000th edit just now, congratulations on all your editing! — TrekkyStar ( talk 01:52, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Could You help me with Tristan Marshal's Page?
Thank you so much for helping me with the Tristan Marshal Page, I really appreciate it. Would you mind helping me some more? I especially need help with the Battle With Tanas and the Search for the Spear of Destiny Sections.

Spear of Destiny
I like the Idea of having a starfleet officer trying to convince Tristan to destroy the spear but I don't wan't it to be Picard. It just doesn't seem to be like Picard to lie to a friend like that. Could it possibly be another guy?

I just had a very intersting idea that would work very well with the Spear of Destiny Story arc. Maybe somehow we could include the Freemasons or the Knights Templar (Yes, that's where I got the idea) into the story. According to myth The knights templar discovered some sort of Holy Relic like the Holy Grail. Maybe we could make the relic the Spear. Also, maybe Tristan's father and mother could be part of the Freemasons. I'm actually surprised I didn't come up with the idea sooner. I just wanted to see if it was ok with you since it is technically a Conflict story.

More on Picard
I see what you mean, but I still don't want it to be Picard who wants to destroy the spear. I just can't see Picard betraying a friend's trust like that. Also, the whole business with Tanas already caused an estrangement between Tristan and Picard. I didn't want it to cause a huge rift between them. Plus, I think changing it to Fredrick Drake adds conflict to Tristan's later adventures. The two were best friends and now they hate each other. By the way, I need help with the Battle with Tanas section again. I need a way for the Templar to evacuate the planet and still fight Tanas' flagship. Thanks for all your doing with the page, I really appreciate it!

A Happy Medium
Now that I think about it maybe you're right. Maybe it can be both Fredrick Drake and Picard who try to convince Tristan to destroy the spear. That would add some intersting conflict. Plus I wanted the Ultari threat to be real. I wanted them to actually look for the spear.

Why I need so much help
The reason why I need so much help writing the pages I created is because although I really like Star Trek, I'm not a diehard trekkie. I know a decent amount about the lore and canon, but I still need somebody whose an expert.

Operation 2020
I had an idea for a story that involves the Templar beaming down to a planet where they find a archway similar to the one in the episode "The City on the Edge of Forever". Tristan and Kyara go through the portal and end up in an alternate universe, namely ours. They have to help with sending astronauts to Mars. The problem I need a way for it not to be a total rip off of First Contact.

Ok, new idea: Tristan and Kyara help with getting the ship to Mars but they are abducted by aliens and it's up to them to escape.

I am completly out of Ideas
I am so ashamed of myself. I can't even come up with ideas for a character I created. Could you please help me? JackfieldsA113 01:13, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Resurrection
I'm impressed. You were able to create all of those cool ideas. I don't know which one to pick, I really like the ones about Q and the Borg or the Ultari cloneing him. Thanks again for all the help. JackfieldsA113 13:07, 3 August 2009 (UTC)

Names
I've decided to go with the idea of cloning Tristan to fight the Ultari but I don't know what to name the clone. I want him to have a different name than Tristan. What do you think? JackfieldsA113 06:19, 9 August 2009 (UTC)

Alternate Universe
I've been thinking about your ideas for Operation 2020 and they're not bad, it's just that it take place in another universe that the Trek universe is not aware of. So they couldn't possibly know about it. The reason why I chose the Guardian of Forever idea is because City on the Edge of Forvever is my favorite episode of the Original Series. I thought it would be neat to expand on that.

Thanks!
Thanks for the photo!--Elitolu - Talk - Star Trek: Noble 23:27, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

USS Challenger (NCC-1812)
Why are you so mad at Typhuss,he has a ansector commanding the Challenger.Do you hate Typhuss James Halliwell.--67.165.88.232 20:19, 10 August 2009 (UTC)--67.165.88.232 20:19, 10 August 2009 (UTC)


 * Well, I kinda do because he's a womanizing plagiarist who doesn't know how to play fair or when enough women are enough. But that's besides the point, since you vandalized someone else's page, which IS my point, yet you never seem to learn! Bookworm1138 21:07, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

How about this Typhuss's ancestor gets killed and some else can take command of the Challenger.--67.165.88.232 20:36, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

New Terran Empire
I want to help you with your New Terran Empire idea,the Rebellion could defat the Alliance in 2385 and the New Terran Empire is born out of the ashes of the Terran Rebellion and call me back when you read this.--TyphussJediVader 13:43, September 16, 2009 (UTC)

Annika Hansen
No,Annika Hansen (mirror) is mirror universe and Annika Hansen (alternate mirror universe)is alternate mirror universe and do you have a resason for deleting Annika Hansen (mirror.--TyphussJediVader 18:04, September 16, 2009 (UTC) Go head and delete Annika Hansen (mirror),sounds go to me.--TyphussJediVader 18:17, September 16, 2009 (UTC)

Tristan Marshal
Could you put in that Tristan Marshal helped Typhuss and the USS Intrepid-A defeat the Xindi-Suliban Alliance in 2385 and Tristan and Typhuss had an encounter with an alternate Terran Empire in 2388,a universe that Typhuss visited in 2383 and in 2384,write me back when you read this.--TyphussJediVader 22:56, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

Deanna Troi mirror
Could you get a new picture of Deanna Troi mirror,this picture is poor and get the picture from Memory Beta File:TroiMirror.jpg--TyphussJediVader 17:19, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

I'm Sorry
Insert non-formatted text here I'm sorry I said you cut the balls of my childhood. I just was really stressed out and had a lot of things on my mind. I guess I just took it out on you. It was really stupid of me since you've helped me out so much with my characters. Please forgive me.

User:TrekkyStar/Samantha Wildman
I have a crisis with user TrekkyStar,he is telling me that i can't put my idea on the Samantha Wildman page,he can't tell me what do and could you talk to him,if that doesn't work block him,thanks for any help you can do.--TyphussJediVader 22:09, October 1, 2009 (UTC)

Edward Shield and Arthur Rosslyn
I've always seen Arthur Rosslyn as Edward Shield if he had gone really bad and decided that the Federation is 100% evil and the everyone in it deserved to die. That's why he stole Khan's Journal. So I have come up with a story idea where Edward is apporached by Arthur and is offered the chance to join him and the supermen and destroy the federation.

Another Idea
I also thought that maybe Tristan Marshal would appear and he and Arthur would sort of have a battle over Edward's soul.

Typhuss James Halliwell mirror
Could you not have Typhuss die in 2407 after Hoshi Sato VII dies Typhuss gets out of death and Typhuss tells Hoshi Sato mirror that she needs him.No one like him would not lead the Imperial Navy the way he does,Empress Sato gives Typhuss his old positions back.Put my idea on the Typhuss James Halliwel mirror and Hoshi Sato mirror pages,thanks.--TyphussJediVader 12:03, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

USS Intrepid-A
Why did you put Kira Nerys,Typhuss's wife as a Captain's personal guard and why did you add Olivia Benson to the crew of the USS Intrepid-A,Olivia is not part of my crew.--TyphussJediVader 13:53, October 6, 2009 (UTC)

Nox and the Destruction of Romulus
I thought of this idea where Nox finds out that Romulus was destroyed and I was wondering how it would affect him. Since he's your character, I think you would be beter suited to write about that. Just an idea.

Star Trek: Intrepid: Alternate mirror Empire
Could you make a story series for me called Star Trek:Intrepid,make a story where Typhuss and Samantha Carter are captured by Empress Hoshi Sato of the alternate mirror universe.Set the story in 2384,thanks.--TyphussJediVader 12:34, October 17, 2009 (UTC)

Timeline of the mirror universe
Why are you removing this idea 2383 - The Alliance begins to build a new superweapon, threatening the balance of power.Miles Smiley O'Bren travels to the prime universe and asks Captain Typhuss James Kira to convince Kathryn Janeway to join the Terran Rebellion.Later Kathryn Janeway leaves the Alliance and joins the Terran Rebellion.Any hopes of the energy dissipator weapon is ended when Kathryn Janeway joins the Terran Rebellion and the information destroyed.What is your reason and keep this on that page.--TyphussJediVader 14:19, October 21, 2009 (UTC) There are mirror Borg in the mirror universe,in the Star Trek Mirror Universe book Glass Empires,story The Worst of Both Worlds set in 2371. User:TyphussJediVader|TyphussJediVader]] 14:50, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

Cheyenne Mountain Complex
You can make the changes on the Cheyenne Mountain Complex page then and i like your ideas.--TyphussJediVader 20:58, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Elizabeth Weir
Could you remove that old picture of Elizabeth Weir and get File:Elizabeth Weir.jpg from the Stargate wiki,thanks.--TyphussJediVader 02:15, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

Federation Civil War
I have an idea how to end the Federation Civil War,my idea is that there is a battle between the Intrepid and the Enterprise-C.The Intrepid is able to destroy the Enterprise-C and with the destruction of the Enterprise-C and the death of Edward Shield that ends the war.Just an idea for you to accpet,write me back when you get this.--TyphussJediVader 14:42, November 10, 2009 (UTC)

Typhuss Revenge idea
So do you want to your Typhuss Revenge idea,it's a great idea and do that idea.Write me back when you read this.--TyphussJediVader 17:35, November 10, 2009 (UTC) Change the idea,Typhuss would not return to the Delta Quadrant and have Typhuss remain in Starfleet and not leave the Federation.--TyphussJediVader 18:04, November 10, 2009 (UTC) Have someone esle kill Shield but not Typhuss.--TyphussJediVader 18:10, November 10, 2009 (UTC)Typhuss is not going to kill Shield just because he has an illness!,take it out and have someone esle kill him.--TyphussJediVader 18:39, November 10, 2009 (UTC)

Typhuss
What are you talking about! yes he does.Those another women are ones he dated and one he married before getting married to Kira. So what is it that you are saying,that you think he is dating another women while married to Kira.You have the wrong idea, you worthless piece of shit!and dont get on to me about my grammar,I'll type however I facking want to!.--TyphussJediVader 00:56, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

Why is Typhuss such a womanizer? Does he not respect women?

Tserran
Hold on man, you just edited the my Tserran page without my permission next time ask first.

Your opinion?
I just wanted to ask for your opinion on the "new" main page of Memory Gamma. I thought that the original seemed so cluttered with information that I made it more simple. Also, maybe you could clean up your talk page? — TrekkyStar ( talk 18:21, November 22, 2009 (UTC)