User:Dvp7/Critical analysis

Hi people, just wondered if you could fill this questionnaire in for me, if you have read my story (if you haven't read the story, ignore this and don't worry - I don't mind!). Just to see where I'm at and see if anything needs improving etc. You can be really nice or really harsh - it's meant to be a critical analysis. Get back to me when you want, there's no rush.

1. How do you like the story so far?

2. Which characters do you like, and why?

3. Do you think any characters are being "overused"?

4. Whose story would you like to see developed a bit more?

5. Can you keep up with the plotlines or are there too many?

6. Does the end of any chapter create a bit of suspense, cliff-hanger-like in anticipation of the next chapter?

7. Has anything surprised you in the story yet?

8. Any canon disputes...?

9. Is any more description needed, if so, more description of what? Ships, people, places etc.

10. What do you think may happen next?

11. What would you like to see happen?

12. On a scale of 1-10, 1 being poor and 10 being excellent, how would you rate the story so far?

13. Any other feedback you feel may be helpful?

If you could create a new section on this page to reply, then I'll have questions and answers in the same place. If you have done this questionnaire, I thank you. If not, like I said - don't worry! It's no big deal. DaveSubspace Message 02:15, 5 March 2009 (UTC)